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Title: FISH-O-DRAMA
Part two “The coffee date”
Author: [livejournal.com profile] pippii
Rating: PG
Word Count: 978
Warnings: None
Written for: Challenge #3 at JaredChris
Prompts: ”Palm-tree” and ”sand”
Summary: Coffee can lead to……problems??



”What’s wrong with this one”, Jared asked in a desperate voice.
He have been trying outfits for the last two hours and no matter what he put on his two best friends, Billie and Angela, had turned it down.
He knew the girls would be trouble the moment he told them about his date with Chris Cane.
He had almost thrown himself at Angela when he got home from work as she was the first one he saw, getting a smirk from Billie before the question he knew she would ask; ”So Jay, who is he?”.
When he had told them Chris name, the girls had spend what seemed like ten minutes squealing and jumping up and down with him, until they had calmed down and pronounced themselves his personal dressers.
That was why Jared was standing in front of his mirror in Jeans and a rather nice blue t-shirt, looking slightly desperate at his friends that sat on his bed and just gaped at him.
”Nothing’s wrong”, Billie said, ”this is perfect, you look amazing Jay.”
Angela nodded at her words and Jared’s face split in a grin; ”Cool, so I’m good to go now”, he asked heading for the door.
The girls ran up to him, kissed him and wished him luck and finally let him out of the door.

Chris was sitting at a table underneath a palm-tree. He liked the coffee place here, the sand and palm-trees making it feel like having a vacation.
It was Steve’s and he was expanding the look, that was why they had been fish hunting today.
He felt a little worried though..he´ve just met the kid that day at the FISH-O-RAMA.
He normally didn’t pick up guys like that, but there was something about that kid that spoke to him..not to mention the fact that he had a copy of Chris´ magazine in the drawer.

A rather girly scream had Chris focus on his surroundings, looking at the patio above him.
The kid, Jared laid there, sprawled under a palm-tree.

Jared wanted noting else than to sink into the ground and disappearing right now.
He laid there, sprawled under a palm-tree feeling like the worlds biggest idiot.
Why oh why was that palm-tree there, he thought as he picked himself of off the ground with as much dignity as he could muster.
He blushed a crimson red though at the sight of Chris, making his way towards him.
“Hey”, Jared murmured, trying to get the sand off of his jeans.
“Hey yourself”, Chris smiles grabbing Jared had and leading him carefully down to their small table.
“Glad you could be here”, Chris says and Jared felt so much better by the words, until he saw the guy moving towards them, a big grin on his face. It was Chris` friend, the guy he had landed on at the shop.
Chris saw the frown on Jared’s face and hurriedly said;” That’s Steve, my best friend, it is his place and he makes the best coffee in the world.”
Steve stopped beside Chris, clapped him on the shoulder, then held his hand out to Jared that took it and shook it.
“Nice to see you in an upright position”, Steve says and gets a slap in the stomach from Chris.
“Nice to see you”, Jared murmurs, blushes and buries his nose in the coffee menu.
“What do you like?” Chris asks, and Jared just about slams his mouth shot before the words, “you sprawled out under me”, comes out.
“I’d like a Southern Turtle”, he answers handing the menu to Steve
Chris laughs and looks at Steve; “Black”, he says and Steve moves away shaking his head at them.
Jared squirms a little on his stool and try not to stare at Chris.
He is wearing jeans and a t-shirt, that fits all the right places on his broad torso, reminding Jared that he is just a scrawny kid and that Chris is way out of his league.

“So,” Chris says after Steve put their drinks down on the table and left again.
Jared looks at him over the raised glass of Southern Turtle, “So” he replies and takes a sip of his Turtle. Chris is smirking at the picture in front of him and Jared blushed once again…he should have ordered a black coffee like Chris, but had to go and order this cold sweet girly thing..epic fail.
“So“, Chris says again taking a sip of his own coffee; “I know that you like extremely sweet, flavoured coffee, gets bit by goldfish, have a thing for me and blush a lot….but who are you really?”
“ohmmmm”, Jared try to answer, but almost chokes on his coffee thingy and after Chris slapped him on the back and the blush have left his cheeks, he says; “I’m just a big clumsy dork, that cannot even drink a cup of coffee with out embarrass myself in front of the man of my dreams…….” Jared’s voice evens out as the sound of his words reach his ears and he stands.
“I’m sorry, I have to go..”
Before he gets far, he feels a hand on his wrist and Chris stands beside him.
“I would really like to have dinner with a big clumsy dork”, he says, lips so close to Jared’s ear that his breath makes Jared shiver, “my place tomorrow?”.
Jared nods and turns his head in time to catch Chris´ lips in a soft kiss that had Jared floating on cloud nine all night.
Jared actually enjoys the way that Angela and Billie spends 30 minutes squealing and making plans for his wardrobe when he gets home and tell them…
Then he goes to his bedroom, pulls out the Player Magazine from under his pillow, licks his lips and remember Chris` lips on his, and makes himself comfortable on his bed.

Date: 2010-06-18 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] magser.livejournal.com
Awwwww poor dorky Jared....*cuddles him* Can I have him...oh can I have them both?

Date: 2010-06-18 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/woman_of_/
Oh poor Jared, he keeps embarrissing himself. It's sweet. Chris seems to have a soft spot for him.

Date: 2010-06-18 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorsd.livejournal.com
oh poor Jared... i so feel for him... nicely done p!!!

HUGS XXXX

Date: 2010-06-18 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silnt-whisperer.livejournal.com
awww jay *hugs him* very cute sweetie :)

Date: 2010-06-18 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tjwinchester.livejournal.com
poor baby. beautiful fic dear :o)

Date: 2010-06-18 07:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jodean80.livejournal.com
Naughty, naughty Jared!
“you sprawled out under me” - I so like the way he thinks *nods*

Thanks for sharing. I like' big clumsy dork' Jared.

Date: 2010-06-19 02:07 am (UTC)
ext_37250: made by: dhamphir (wet)
From: [identity profile] princesslanie.livejournal.com
awwwwwwww cuteness

Date: 2010-06-19 10:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audeamus22.livejournal.com
Nawww sooo cute!! I really like Jared's two best friends!! :D hehe, they just sound so cool!! :D
Although I think that Angela girl really needs to meet Chris ;) just saying... not for any reason or anything!! :p

Awesome work once again hun!! I love your writing!!
xx

Date: 2010-06-19 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audeamus22.livejournal.com
well she might embarras Jared for the fun of it ;) But Chris would totally be taken by her! Love at first sight I'm sure (not the same love he feels for Jared of course!! :p)
Haha

Date: 2010-06-19 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] audeamus22.livejournal.com
ohh!! *Flails!* Can't wait to read!! :D

Date: 2010-06-19 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenilees.livejournal.com
LOL I was a little glad that Jared ordered the cold girly coffee just in case he got even more nervous and dumped it on himself or worse yet, Chris.
Poor boy, maybe after having dinner with Chris he'll be less nervous around him. LOL

Date: 2010-06-20 05:36 am (UTC)
ext_19743: (Jared Live Laugh Love)
From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
hehe...don't know which I loved more...Jared's clumsiness or his two best friends! You are awesome!

Date: 2010-06-21 03:30 am (UTC)
ext_19743: (Jared concentrate)
From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
lol, that's okay, Billie is fine. Name's Julie, by the way. :)

Date: 2010-07-16 05:30 am (UTC)
ext_19743: (CK album sunglasses)
From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
Sorry it took so long to respond...I'm just finding the time to check my email.

Do I like Steve? I have nothing against him or anything, but I just don't like the sound of his voice. [livejournal.com profile] audeamus22 has sent me a bunch of his music, and I just can't get into it.

I take it that you're a fan of Steve?

Date: 2010-07-16 09:45 pm (UTC)
ext_19743: (Christian hold mike/sing)
From: [identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com
lol, and see, I'm the opposite. I heard Chris before I heard Steve...granted, it was just because Chris sang in an episode of Angel, but still...I loved his voice even then. I was thrilled when I saw that he had other songs out. I still listened to the Kane songs, but I do prefer Chris' by himself. There's nothing wrong with Steve, don't get me wrong, but his voice just doesn't do anything for me.

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